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Done in photoshop. My girlfriend inspires me thing like that... weird heh... plus I'm sick... I'm pretty happy of the outcome, hope you guys will like it!.
Comments and constructive crit. appreciated.
Some brushes by ~KeReN-R used, but I screwed them so much that I could have not credited her.
Comments and constructive crit. appreciated.
Some brushes by ~KeReN-R used, but I screwed them so much that I could have not credited her.
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I'm from ~critiqueme.
I'm definitely not an expert when it comes to digital abstracts, but I'll try to give you some thoughts. Someone else suggested that the piece should be red because it depicts rage, but I totally disagree. That's a clichéd perception, like saying that all art that is about love has to be pink or red. I'm rather fond of the colors. But I'd really recommend taking out the text spelling "rage" in the picture.
I'm mainly bothered by two things in the piece: the evenness of the composition and the overly sharp textures of some parts. Especially since the topic is such an emotion as rage, which certainly isn't harmonic or balanced and thus IMO would warrant more negative space and less symmetry in the composition.
By "sharp textures" I mean the stuff at the center and some of the diagonal and vertical lines going upwards from it. They look too sharp and pixelated, like artifacts that have resulted from overly sharpening some details. It looks strange and awkward to me.
I'm definitely not an expert when it comes to digital abstracts, but I'll try to give you some thoughts. Someone else suggested that the piece should be red because it depicts rage, but I totally disagree. That's a clichéd perception, like saying that all art that is about love has to be pink or red. I'm rather fond of the colors. But I'd really recommend taking out the text spelling "rage" in the picture.
I'm mainly bothered by two things in the piece: the evenness of the composition and the overly sharp textures of some parts. Especially since the topic is such an emotion as rage, which certainly isn't harmonic or balanced and thus IMO would warrant more negative space and less symmetry in the composition.
By "sharp textures" I mean the stuff at the center and some of the diagonal and vertical lines going upwards from it. They look too sharp and pixelated, like artifacts that have resulted from overly sharpening some details. It looks strange and awkward to me.